The Fires of Brotherhood: an improvised plot (Friday, May 8)

A Show Synopsis from Friday, May 8th, by castmember Michael Fleming. I find this soo interesting, both to read as a story that's been improvised onstage, AND because I always have such a terrible time remembering what the heck I'm improvising. I mean, I was IN this show! Go Michael! ;o)

[In the weekly email, we called this show "The Fires of Brotherhood."]


Characters:

* Gerard/"Jerry" (Trish): younger of fraternal twin sons of the duke.

* Bernard (Alex): older twin

* Duke (Michael)

* Nancina/Nance (Mandy): one of two high-born sisters forced to the coast by the fire.

* Lancina/Lance (Michael): the other high-born sister.

* Henry (Mandy): nefarious 'friend' of Gerard planted by Eye-Patch-Man (EPM). Turns out to be EPM's brother.

* Eye-Patch-Man/EPM (Alex): shadowy figure plotting to control the ducal seat through Henry's influence over Gerard.

* EPM's wife/paramour (Trish)

* various servants, guards, vendors, etc.



Setting:

Town of Valista on the coast - pretty, with a beach (modeled after Santa Barbara, an audience suggestion). Crowded with newcomers due to a fire in the countryside.



Act I: a fire has run through the local countryside leaving people bereft and wandering, driven down to the sea and the towns there. The twin sons of the duke are in one of these towns (Valista), competing as they always do. The elder one (by mere moments) will inherit and the younger is being steered into the clergy to his dismay. Their long-suffering father (the Duke) tries to quell their bickering. We meet the sisters, Nancina (Nance) and Lancina (Lance), who are also quite competitive. We learn that they, too, have been forced to the town and suffered loss in the fire, most especially Nance who lost both the wedding dress she made and her betrothal along with it.



Henry appears and insinuates himself into Gerard's good graces - is he a true friend? The duke decides to solve his sons' competition issues by dissolving primogeniture and declaring that the first son to find a high-born wife will be his heir. The catch is that the sons must do this in the guise of common men. The duke remarks that if neither can accomplish this in good order, then he'll make Henry the heir!



Meanwhile, in an attempt to cheer themselves up, the sisters decide to go out and look for men. Then Eye-Patch-Man appears and reveals that he planted Henry with Gerard in order to gain influence over the duchy. The intermission happened around here.



Act II: Henry, EPM and EPM's wife/mistress discuss the situation - due to the duke's sudden pronouncement, Henry might end up as the heir! That would simplify the whole 'influence the ducal seat' thing. The rub is that the young men cannot be allowed to succeed in their search. There is a question of Henry's loyalty to EPM should he become the duke himself, but after some wrangling and protestations Henry departs to disrupt Gerard and Bernard.



Gerard professes ignorance in the art of wooing, so Henry advises him to be forceful to the point of brutishness ("throw her on the ground!"). Gerard exits to put this advice into practice, and then Bernard asks Henry for advice of his own and receives the news that he should stalk his prey like a hunter, following her everywhere and then delight her with his inventive invective by insulting her roundly and repeatedly.



Gerard meets Lancina on the beach and though at first he is off-puttingly violent, he relents and the two fall for each other. He presses her to meet him later and elope; they kiss and he leaves. Bernard's (pur)suit of Nancina does not go so well, ending with her distraught and fleeing in fear. Later, Lance is comforting Nance and sharing the news that she has found someone when Gerard himself breaks into the house. After some kerfuffle the two kneel down to pledge their troth. Behind and above, Bernard sees them and decides in something of a panic that he must take steps to halt this lest he lose to his brother. He shoots an arrow at them striking Lancina. (I suppose this means that they were in a courtyard?) Then he, too, breaks into the house (bad security :) and is horrified at what has happened. The brothers duel, and Gerard wins, though the thrust was not fatal (Bernard was "only bruised", I think). Lancina is wounded, but not badly. The couple decide to wed. In all of the hullabaloo Nancina discovers that Bernard is actually pretty cute :).



Gerard takes all of this news to his father the duke, adding that he does not need to be heir, but has found a deeper and better purpose in his love, asking only that the duke help the people rebuild for they are suffering. The duke is impressed and declares that Gerard has truly become a man, and has developed the tools and character to be a good ruler - he shall be the heir.



EPM, EPM's wife/mistress and Henry meet in several scenes. I'm a bit unclear as to what happened when, but there is the following amongst this little band:

* we discover that EPM set the fire in the countryside.

* Henry muses to himself about brotherhood and how the two brothers are reconciled. He wavers.

* EPM's wife suspects Henry of wavering, and is convinced of it upon hearing from a guard who spied on Henry earlier. She convinces EPM to have Henry killed - she sends the guard as an assassin.

* The guard has failed, it appears, so EPM's wife/mistress leaves to do the job herself.



EPM is in a state about the situation and decides to take matters into his own hands by poisoning Gerard before he can wed Lancina. Henry appears - not dead at all - and reveals that he is EPM's brother. Henry tries to convince EPM to relinquish his dark purpose, but to no avail.



Now we're at the wedding. Lancina has a moment with Gerard speaking to him from behind, but won't let him see her; she departs. Gerard is wandering about the seating area and encounters a disguised EPM who tries to give him poisoned wine. Henry appears and intercedes, trying to convince EPM to stay his hand. EPM is unmoved, so Henry takes the wine into his own hand. EPM tries to intervene again, but Henry decides the matter by drinking the poison himself, to EPM's horror. Henry goes off to die, followed by EPM.



The wedding goes forward, and we learn that both couples now plan to wed. The duke has given assistance to the people who are already rebuilding. The lovers are joyful and content. All is well in Valista and beyond!